Weblog of Nadine

May 15, 2006 at 15:35 o\clock

Words - words - words

by: jamryn

There are millions and millions of words we can use to communicate with. Yet when we attempt to puff ourselves up  and exaggerate - to make our selves apear greater than we are.  It might look something like this.......

Amy attired herself in massive ground or molded pieces of glass, with obvious curves intended to reflect light rays to increase the productivity of the hollowed out structors located in the bony sockets of her skull. 

She was not cognizant that these particular  pieces of glass so over bosted the physical deminsions of the above mentioned hollowed out structors.

What good does it do us to exaggerate? Unless we are telling a whopper of a story, A fish story or slinging the bull, all those extra words  really does not add to the story.  In the  piece above  I used  fifty nine words.  Fourty eight of them were totaly un nessary and could be though of as being waisted. What might have been a better way? 

 Amy wore thick lenses that exaggerated the size of her eyes.

 


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